Monday, April 26, 2010

The Gentle Giant - Keniah

The Gentle Giant
Once upon a time there was afunny Gentle Giant living on a cloud in a house. She has nice rose lips like a red red red red rose . She had nice pike herr.He was nice and had lots of little friends. The Gentle Giant was all wass had a smilly on her fass.had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

1 comment:

  1. I like the way you have describe your giants lips being red like red roses. I can imagine the bright red lips.
    I was wondering what you cloud and the giants house looks like?

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wow Brandon, it is so nice to see your work online.