Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Gentle Giant Natalia -part 3

The Gentle Giant
Once long ago there was a Gentle Giant he had a green t-shirt ,blue pants, brown shoes with red and yellow laces and his nose was as shape as a blade and he had blonde curly hair and blue eyes. He is living on a white and sparkly cloud and it shaped like a lollypop. He is living in a brick house with gardens all around his house , they were flower gardens. He was nice and had lots of little friends. The Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things like dinosaurs and any thing you can think of.
The children’s parents liked playing with the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their world Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.
Can we put a mat under the cloud so the sand drops onto the mat. The mat is helled by 4 invisible pegs that are stuck in the sparkly white cloud. The gentle giant stuck his head threw the cloud to make sure the mat was under the sand pit so it didn’t rain sand again.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Natalia.I really enjoyed reading your story.I can,t wait to see what happens next,will the mat work? I did get a little confused at one point,was it the childrens parents or the children who were playing with the giant? You might want to clarify that in paragraph 2.

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wow Brandon, it is so nice to see your work online.