Wednesday, May 5, 2010

gentle giant - ashleigh

A long long time ago there was asmart Gentle Giant living on astorm cloud in a House.she was nice and had lots ofnice little friends.
She had flat hair and her eyes shined like a star and her coler was vialet her house was made of candy and theguardswere dragons
The Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When hercool friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in itthe sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got madbecause their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow.now The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but she likedit better outside in the sunshine. sheneeded to work out how to fix the problem.

1 comment:

  1. I liked how you said your gentle giant is smart and lives on a storm cloud. I wondered if you cloud has lightening flashes or bolts coming out of the cloud and if it was a nice place to live because storm clouds look mean and rough?

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wow Brandon, it is so nice to see your work online.