Thursday, April 29, 2010

Gentle Giant - Lori - part 2

The Gentle Giant Once upon a time there was a fat Gentle Giant wifi popil spikes on his bake living on a cloud in a house. He was is nice and had lots of little friends.he is aThe Gentle Giant when pepl be nice to him and he a red nose old wood house with broken windows and spiders every where. had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things. The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line. The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

1 comment:

  1. I like the way you began describing your giant. I can imagine the purple skin and spikes on his back. Why does his nose turn red when he is being friendly?

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wow Brandon, it is so nice to see your work online.