Monday, April 26, 2010

The Gentle Giant - Josh


thenwas abeautifulgentleGiaht the giaht smetim and smetim then The Giant goter for along wallthen the gentle giaht were was night timethe gentle giaht have a sleepin bed then was morring and make lots of things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

1 comment:

  1. I like how you say your giant is beautiful. What is it about him that is beautiful. Can you tell us more about where he lives.

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wow Brandon, it is so nice to see your work online.