Monday, April 26, 2010

The Gentle Giant

The Gentle Giant
Once upon a time long ago, there was a Gentle Giant with a friendly,wrinkly smile.He had wonderful spotty arms
And legs.His tummy was stripey and he had little horns on top of his head.The gentle giant has short black hair and
Twinkling green eyes and Orange little shoes.His stripes where green and blue and his spots where black and white. . He was nice and had lots of little friends. The Gentle Giant had built a big sandpit and had lots of trucks and diggers to play with, in it. When his friends came to play they would play in the sandpit and make lots of things.
The children’s parents liked the Gentle Giant but got angry when everyone played in the sandpit because it would rain sand all over their houses and gardens below. Mums got grumpy because their floors were always sandy and when it rained it would get messy. The people who liked gardening got mad because the leaves on the plants would break and they wouldn’t grow. The clothes always had sand through them when they were hanging on the washing line.
The Gentle Giant got sad because the children were told not to play in the sandpit when they went and played with the Gentle Giant. He liked playing inside the house but he liked it better outside in the sunshine. He needed to work out how to fix the problem.

1 comment:

  1. I think your description of your giant having spotty arms and legs and a stripy tummy makes him sound like a fun giant. I was wondering how the sand rained onto the gardens. Where did the sand come from? Could you explain more?

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wow Brandon, it is so nice to see your work online.